I look at you and you look ahead
I frown and you do not see
I speak but you make no reaction
I speak again and you say you hear me.
So yes, you hear me.
But are you listening?
Am I making contact?
Hearing and listening
Confuse them not as synonyms
Not for each other
Hearing is at the surface,
Simply hovering but doing nothing
But listening is absorption,
The words going deep, deep within and taking affect.
Are they making contact?
You tell me again that you hear,
But are you listening?
I stomp, I yell
I scream, I cry
But all you can do is hear me.
How on Earth do I make contact?
But you are unaware of my struggle
My words simply bounce off your bubble
No matter how hard I try
How I try to make contact!
So I wait and stare
Wait for you to turn for me
Stare to get it through your head
You must be able to listen to that!
Surely if my words dont reach you
My silence must!
So I stare on and on.
I am forced to wait for contact.














Comments
I think it's quite powerful, especially at the end there. Your words portray the message well.
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I'm glad I get the message through which I find very important in my work. Thanks for taking the time to read again 3wyl!
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"It is best to light a candle than to curse the darkness."
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I just love it! If anyone could pay more attention to the other, if anyone could at least try to 'make contact', then the world surely would be a better place.
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"I stopped believing there was a power of good and a power of evil that were outside us. And I came to believe that good and evil are names for what people do, not for what they are." Philip Pullman (The Amber Spyglass)
It's always amazing how words and things that seem soo much a like can be so different! I really wanted to bring that out here. There are just so many little things that need to be done to make everything just a little bit better.
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"It is best to light a candle than to curse the darkness."
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If you've got the time, check out my friend's, ~Shanii21 , poems please!
Thank you Loco! I'm quite thankful to have that ability.
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"It is best to light a candle than to curse the darkness."
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If you've got the time, check out my friend's, ~Shanii21 , poems please!
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W.T.F.
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"It is best to light a candle than to curse the darkness."
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If you've got the time, check out my friends', ~Shanii21 & :develLocoMono , poems. You won't be disappointed.
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